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Cteno Super Shotgun Moderator         Since: 01-11-05 Since last post: 435 days Last activity: 433 days |
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| A beautiful ghost
Stunning, entrancing, No matter how hard I try, I can never speak to you A lovely apparition Gorgeous, fascinating, No matter how hard you try, You can never keep me from caring A graceful revenant Pleasant, alluring, No matter what we try, We can never agree A forlorn phantom Gloomy, miserable, No matter what you try, Your heart is in agony |
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Phoenixocracy The one true Xeodent  Since: 01-08-10 From: Xeomerica Since last post: 2040 days Last activity: 2040 days |
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| I like progressive change, and the poem overall.
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 443 days Last activity: 443 days |
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| For some reason I am just super pleased that you used the term revenant. It doesn't get used enough. But yes, a very nice poem, and I also liked the progression. |
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