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caxama Archer          Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6639 days Last activity: 6252 days |
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| Ok, I know this sounds strange, but I have an idea to propose: I'm going to right two lines, and then I'd like you, any of you to add two lines of your own.It's like those stories where each person takes a turn telling a part of it, but this is a poem.
So, here are my two lines: I wish I was on the other side of the mirror, So I wouldn't have to face my refelction. |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt  Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4535 days Last activity: 4529 days |
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| For chills of my absolution prevails,
hopeless ways reflect and hurt like nails... Edit from here forth in this thread: Taking out Layout (Last edited by Sajin Gorotto on 02-10-06 05:32 PM) |
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caxama Archer Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6639 days Last activity: 6252 days |
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| I alone must walk this path
Face the fury,face the wrath |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4535 days Last activity: 4529 days |
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| Of chilling times and hurting rhymes
faithful days and saddend games Bloddy trails and nightengails hooded viels and lightning-tales Faces alone in absolution |
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caxama Archer Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6639 days Last activity: 6252 days |
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| Don’t look with your blind eye
Don’t turn a deaf ear. Don’t think that I’m lying, Or you simply won’t hear. |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4535 days Last activity: 4529 days |
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| Look with a true eye
Listen with your feeling ear Never assume of the hiding So you will know im here OOC:  Loving this!
(Last edited by Sajin of the Gorotto Sea on 03-01-06 05:09 PM) |
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caxama Archer Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6639 days Last activity: 6252 days |
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| I walk in the night
Calling up the carnel needs The lust, the wants, the taunts Find the prey within the hour of Deep Midnight Watch the Angel But don't get close My hour is at hand And yet, there is one, who will never Understand This is so awsome it's : Awsome Possum! (colorguard joke, means it's really really good) You guys, this looks so good,you both have major talented...I'm really glad that it was you two that answer this and not someone that would completely change the tone of what this has become...I love you guys! |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4535 days Last activity: 4529 days |
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| A little twisted fait portrays
The feelings that are left astray The tip of her fethers wither As I began to bicker Holding my hand out forth Wanting a connecting hoard Of that warmpth so loving Redemption day is soon coming OOT: Its just me and you, so you love me or something? I have like 4 folders filled to the rim with poems, im pretty experienced...Wish I had a better expanded vocabulary |
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caxama Archer Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6639 days Last activity: 6252 days |
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| Really, it's just you and me, oh, I forgot about that.
That's awsome that you have so much in poetry...if you want to expand your vocabulary try using word and then shift+ F7, that will bring up a thesaurus, then you can do what I do, play around with it until you find something you like instead of the only word you can think of...thanks.bye |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4535 days Last activity: 4529 days |
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| Woah were done?
I kinda wanted to keep going! |
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caxama Archer Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6639 days Last activity: 6252 days |
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| woah.. no sweet heart, I never said that we were done. Hell, we could go on for as long as you would like. Just keep posting and I will too.
You rock for this, you know that right? sorry, I'd offer something but I A) have to get to practice (colorguard) and B) can't think of anything to say... HUG AND A PIXI STICK (if you don't get that then check my profile) |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4535 days Last activity: 4529 days |
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| Alright, I guess ill add another batch of lines then....
Sweat gleams as my withering self esteem grows tiering as my soul begins to die The soul redeems for strength The mind searches for faith The body wants to love and hold as our destiny begins to fold and mold Forever it seems in our endless eternity a fatheming grasp at our destiny Please whisper in my ear the kingdom A forever palace of an undying fathom ________ OOT:...Wah :: Karate chops :: |
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caxama Archer Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6639 days Last activity: 6252 days |
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| Oh my that was great!
I feel intimidated...mommy I'm only kidding...that was really really really great, have I ever told you that I love your writting, and the imagery is incredible? *Huggs* Do I truely wish to go quitely into the night? Is giving up my only choice My soul reaches further Searching for the light My mind reels Though my body may be bruised, battered, broken My heart, my spirit Will love and hold The destiny that I choose to mold Eternity is endless Watch the ebbing of the tides Though I cannot fathem destiny I can learn to live in reality. I will not walk in the valley in the shadow of death For it is not Death I follow and yearn for It is Life It is Hope That I will search for |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4535 days Last activity: 4529 days |
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| With the eyes of unspoken,
yet the lives are not taken Follow the timeline of forever society and life will end, together in harmony |
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caxama Archer Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6639 days Last activity: 6252 days |
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| Wow, that sounds so good that I don't know wether to add to it or to say let's send it to print...what do you think?
I don't know what to think Things have become so So ....... I can't think of the words... |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4535 days Last activity: 4529 days |
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Its your poem, you end it when you feel like 
in all honesty...the title shouldnt be called "A World of many Talants"...dosent suit the mood of the poem... Im thinking of "Timelife" And that word your looking for...Is it "Attoning"? ( Meaning that the pureness of the poem is at its need ) |
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caxama Archer Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6639 days Last activity: 6252 days |
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| *giggles a little*
Actually dear, I kinda added a line or 3 for the poem. world of many talents was simply a statement to get someone like you to pay attention to it. Timelife sounds cool, and I'm not sure if you ment to but Attoning sounds pretty good for a title. And it's as much your poem as it is mine, after all, you've contributed as much if not more than I have to it. |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4535 days Last activity: 4529 days |
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| Oh...then I guess you finish it whenever you want to...
Heres my lines As glimmering birth fades Into a withering death glades Our bond shall slowly fade With only a memory of loving bane |
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caxama Archer Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6639 days Last activity: 6252 days |
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| You are sweet, did you know that?
Thanks for doing this, it's been really helpful, in that it I can see things that I can do and that I can see another person's style next to my own and it shows me more of myself in a way.Thank you. Will I stand the test of Time? |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4535 days Last activity: 4529 days |
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Originally posted by caxama :: Shrugs :: I dont really know how to reply to something like that but uhh...Thanks? Will the test of time withstand? Of morning glooms and wedding bands? Of flames to ponder And blist to gander Of my selfish desire to love your attire |
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